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ersaph's Stats
  • poems: 42
  • average poem: 7.7 (7.1) (graph)
  • comments: 289
  • ratings: 134
  • average rating: 3.7
  • forum posts: 231
  • last visit: 17 Feb 07

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Website: http://www.livejournal.com/~ericrseguy

More than anything, this piece makes me sad for you Eric. Sad that you've lost the lucidity to treat your own thoughts with the respect they deserve. You know I think that you're talented, but you shoot yourself in the foot when you write shit like this. Its so counterproductive, in every way. Yes, let's just take your word for it that once there were great poets, and now everyone here sucks--that is definitely a coherent, well-thought-out poem. This reeks of cowardice and shame, and I hope you delete it to clear your name.

Poems by ersaph:
  • Tannis Root
  • "Lynch Touching Bottom."
  • The Waxwing Years: "A Waxwing Slain."
  • Bring Roses
  • I Could Try
  • Laurent, I Am
  • Whales
  • "In Modern Times, Friendship."
  • Cities Burn
  • Poem For Love, and Love of Love
  • Stars
  • "Oh, Mavourneen!"
  • The Whorlings
  • Blandly, Blankly
  • Our Song
  • A Staid Body
  • Mavoureen, Revisited
  • Misery Afoot
  • Finx
  • Dirty Pillows (Asphyxiation)
  • Olive Branch (French Poetry)
  • O desperate faces
  • Damask Bud
  • Lenny A Cab Driver
  • Today I want
  • Lilyajae Palastsi
  • People Don't
  • The Revolutionaries
  • Final Day
  • Διάβολος στην τρίχα μου
  • Driving Is Visual
  • Alleyway Exodus, Stained Sweatervest (Alan Worn's Worst)
  • Manchester
  • My Apartment
  • Aestheists
  • Manchester II
  • An Eccentric Meteorological Fixation

ersaph's favorite poems:
  • Hymns and Incantations
  • Santa's Heroes
  • verisimilitude

Poems ersaph has recently commented on:
  • An Eccentric Meteorological Fixation
  • Dismantled (A Villanelle)
  • A Psychotic Girls Suicide
  • Manchester II
  • Fallen
  • Manchester
  • Damask Bud
  • your dead meat

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  • Southern California Poets!
  • The New Anthology Submission Thread
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  • Poetry Critical Anthology: Nominations and Submissions
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  • MySpace
  • Poetic Bands and there never ending quest to save music from the pop-puppets