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SweetPain's Stats
  • poems: 73
  • average poem: 7.4 (7.4) (graph)
  • comments: 852
  • ratings: 121
  • average rating: 7.6
  • forum posts: 115
  • last visit: 17 Feb 07

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je suis une femme. i love music that makes me feel. i love creative endeavours. i guess i like to learn i am a whole lotta things that don't make sense, but to somebody someday I will. love seems to find its way to hook me like a hungry fish, but drown me like a drunken sailor. i write this "poetry" because, it is one of the purest forms of self expression.................................................................................................. when it comes down to it, im just a hopeless romantic, trombone playing, crazy haired weirdo.

Poems by SweetPain:
  • Sucking Me In
  • tea kettle
  • her brown eyes
  • Nature's Beauty
  • Unrequited love stories make my eyes bleed
  • The Horse of Freedom lost
  • Plastic Wrapped
  • Confessions of a Drug Addict
  • Hate
  • Secret Keeper
  • Just a Shallow Girl
  • Death of a Sociopath
  • Teen Angst Poem
  • Sharpshooter
  • Jazz Hands(edited)
  • Cheesy Love Poem
  • Psychosis of My Mother Passive Patience of My Father
  • I am afraid of Squirrels
  • Mama Just Listen
  • Chit Chat at 5:00am
  • When Lies Are Not Shed Like Dry Skin
  • Who Inhibits this Soul of Mine?
  • He Was Born Crooked
  • The Obscurity of a Perfectionist's Mirror
  • I have joined an online dating service.
  • Once Upon A Pill Popper
  • I'm A Little Tea Pot II
  • Shoelaces
  • The Girls At The Pool
  • The Sunshine of My Life
  • Red Eyes On A Sunny Day
  • Quirked
  • Everything Has Changed
  • Don't Be Afraid, Because We All Are
  • Why Can't Gorgeous Men Just Keep Their Mouths Shut
  • An Emotion Motion
  • Its Worse From A Friend
  • Burning House of Love
  • I Didn't Know the Munsters Were So Good Looking
  • Let It Flow
  • A Band Nerd's Passion
  • Attention Span
  • Oceanic
  • Just War
  • Low High
  • A Destructive Magnificence (a.k.a. Great Balls of Fire)
  • Boredom + Lunacy =
  • After Effects of A Sugar High
  • The Insecurity of a 16-year-old Boy
  • The Essence of Adolescence
  • Words Like A Bird
  • Crazy
  • You're in New York City (edited)
  • Waking Up
  • Clocks, Colours, and You
  • Hey look, I can simulate nirvana
  • Perspective
  • On Deteriorating Friendships
  • On A Positive Note
  • Save me a star I want to make a Wish
  • Writing poems in the oddest places
  • Ravaging me with incoherent thoughts.
  • Robotic Man
  • Pulse - (revised)
  • Into Consciousness
  • An Illusionist?
  • It's like a trip down What the Fuck Lane.
  • Searching
  • Deadly Romanticism
  • Two Worlds On The Same Planet.
  • As the Sparkler Came to a Blunt End.
  • It was not giving up but moving on. a.k.a. waste of time

SweetPain's favorite poems:
  • here we go
  • wanna join the game?
  • you consume the women like a fire
  • oxymoronic high coup
  • seventeen teardrops
  • White Walled Sanity
  • butterflies
  • Putting My Bass Into Her Song (by SirBoggy)
  • DADDY
  • her lips tasted like passionfruit
  • hiroshima won't be as sweet
  • His name was Ray
  • Shadows
  • Wanted, Dad or Alive
  • Grim Defiance
  • Crack Baby
  • grocery girl
  • being bound is to ego, as________ is to ______.
  • reprayer
  • Ode to Peanut Butter
  • time is bunk [lunch at Lacoste Coffee]
  • Delirium
  • Sept. 11 Poem
  • The Myth of Television
  • toes stuck in the sand.
  • Mortal Exit
  • Where Sand Meets Sea
  • Editable
  • Secrets
  • august sends her regards.
  • p.s. take summer with you.
  • Plucked from the road
  • and all your love is true love
  • Feelings in a dixie cup
  • High Above the Realm of Time
  • Never Leave My Mind
  • Atmosphere:Beautiful
  • day break, a moment
  • 08.19.03
  • one of the more important lessons i’ve learned in 28 years
  • The Bending of Seduction
  • grocery shopping for the schizophrenics
  • Green Apple Flavoured Jones
  • summer in alaska

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Threads SweetPain has recently posted in:
  • The Bible is not the word of god
  • I've had it up to here with this website
  • unknown one-givers
  • The Dumbest Thing You've Done for Love?
  • writer's block or the end?
  • weirdest place you wrote a poem
  • Where is everyone from?
  • What Poetic Cliche Are You?


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