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Maela's Stats

poems: 8
average poem: 8.4 (8.3) (graph)
comments: 213
ratings: 80
average rating: 8.3
forum posts: 197
last visit: 11 Feb 07

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User: Maela (view this user's book)

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These are my eyes, and my funky glasses. They're French.
This is a drawing of mine.
I live in Seattle, Washington, USA. I love words, but I have a tendency to be too verbose; I'm employing poetry to curtail it. Be honest when you critique my poems, please. Don't kiss my ass unless you're sincerely motivated to. Know that insults comprised of name-calling will be brushed aside. Don't waste your breath.

Poems by Maela:

On Sore Cheeks and Bated Breath
A Scrunchy Moment
"Do Over!!"
There is Naught to Hear
The Right Way to Hug
Nose Stud (Object Poem)

Maela's favorite poems:

what I meant when I said nothing
your elusive devotion
His Ex, My Oh
For Oft I think of you
I'm Sorry
theoretically me
Philadelphia Falls
my thursday poem
::shakesporn::
Bargains Making Rivers on the Land
poem for the maybes
lady fear came for me, to stay, beau monde
Fiery Skies
poetry on the red line
Not Afraid Anymore
punctuated love.
The Episcopalian Kind
the ash is falling
I am no Poet
fuck art.
Cigarette in the Rain (Soupline Meditation #5)
The Spider and the wife (edited)
Obscenities Free-falling from the Top of your Lungs
Mother is late, we lie in bed early
maybe i could carry your books home for you, or something
I am someone's missing lock.
She smiles

Poems Maela has recently commented on:

Exhalation of Disillusionment
I just want the sky to be
Katrina's Daughters
Nose Stud (Object Poem)
Translate
Revenge of an Irish Witch
Looking for the Reason
Give birth to what's inside you

Threads Maela has recently posted in:

Hi, Everyone!
Punctuate this
what kind of pets do you have?
Unfortunate Names
what are your selfish secrets
england and america
Happy Birthday to me!
I was born on the day after tomorrow 27 years ago

Top Rated (expand)

1. My Father's Eyes Were Blue
2. a cigarette for breakfast
3. an ashtray wouldn't do
4. brave new waves
5. spearmint tea, tracks and trestles
6. Anatomy of a Woman
7. elizabeth and me.
8. Brazilian Butterflies
9. just drink a lot of water
10. old man
11. Choose
12. eye coo
13. this morn- dried flowers grass breathing
14. Sophie
15. put on your choke face

Newest (expand)

Please Wake Me
it was going to be something about bees but its not.
feathersedge
Dreamy Confusion
Daddy....
The hair that broke the camel's back. Yes, I know, the title sucks cliche. Please help!
Garnet
Insane Domain
Insomnia.
Ecstasy
It Was Not a Hug
I Don't Believe You!
Below Zero Degrees Celsius
Caught
Just So Damn Tired

Recently Commented (expand)

conversation with dad on the porch
Let us make man in our image
Not In My Name.
The hair that broke the camel's back. Yes, I know, the title sucks cliche. Please help!
Red Thong
My Father's Eyes Were Blue
Caught
Lake
Basement Parking
As If Walking Jay Was A Crime
an ashtray wouldn't do
I Don't Believe You!
Garnet
Dreamy Confusion
my body (a shape poem)

Recent Best (expand)

1. The Monk Barbecue Show
2. Outings with Rosie : Sidmouth
3. And in These Fields
4. Ecce Homo
5. Cup of Decaf
6. Asleep Somewhere on Thirteenth and Elm
7. All I Want Is You
8. Home to Roost
9. spew 5
10. Water, Tasting of Copper and Tears
11. Not In My Name.
12. my summer kitchen
13. I like you standing here
14. That Month was like a Thousand Songs in the Same Key
15. unknown 1

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