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Inuki's Stats
  • poems: 153
  • average poem: 7.3 (7.3) (graph)
  • comments: 314
  • ratings: 307
  • average rating: 4.4
  • forum posts: 1,071
  • last visit: 15 Feb 07

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Poet Is None Other Than...Inuki

[Writes]
Poetry filled with allusions and references, mostly obscure.

[Motivation]
Apparently, everything in life is an illusion, or mere delusions of the human mind. Since Inuki itself does not know what drives it to write, I shall have to make this up, from what I have perceived.

Inuki is a troubled soul, yet does not realise it. This is partially because it does not believe in the concept of soul. Inuki is motivated by a drive to find out why it is human, and forever searching for "truth"; does God* exist?


[Likes]
Small cats and television.


[Skilled in]
Reaching somewhere and bringing to life poetry which has the power to make one cry and soul feel saddened.


[Theme]
A lot of Japanese references and imagery.


[Style]
Japanese knack for understatement, yet creating some vivid imagery.


[Status on site]
Needs kick, but otherwise a good and intelligent, well versed chap.

*Refer to Edenic references in its poetry. "Eulogy for a Roofer" is a good place to start.


thanks to wendz for the analyzation

[Favourite Poets] T.S. Eliot, Wordsworth, Coleridge, Keats, Yeats, Tristan Tzara, Ezra Pound

[Favourite PC Poets & Friends]
Aforbing, Dandy, Isabelle5, Kaleidazcope, noodleman, Onklcrispy, peanut, Root, Semaj, Wendz, william, Zepplin42.

[Languages] French, Japanese, Queen's English, Chinese, Yiddish, Hebrew, Latin.

[Interests] Philosophy, Japan, Animation, Anime, Art History, Literature, Poetry, Creative Writing, Law, Web Design, PS2, Japanese Stationary.

Feel free to drop me a line via e-mail some time, I'd be glad to chat on MSN.

I'm really not trying to brag, but I just wanted to emphasize some of the wonderful poetry contests I've participated in, held in and outside of PC:

AI's Algorithimic Poetry Challenge: 2nd place winner

AEOS Poetry Contest: 1st Place Winner

National Canadian Poetry Contest (1999): 2nd Place Winner

RANT Ubyssey Poetry Contest (2005): 1st Place Winner

Poems by Inuki:
  • the day was very backwards
  • whup yap
  • the last tic-tac
  • monotone innuendo
  • anecdote: realization
  • dead breath
  • free-loading truckers
  • :[ wish upon my star ]:
  • ++ Commemoration
  • Burying Liquor and Corpses
  • "one nail and you've had it"
  • E-jaculation
  • after all
  • all out of buses
  • all of heaven's petals
  • allusion to Ray joke
  • h e a d A e c h
  • amend the [ amendment
  • alimentary idiosyncracy INSERT
  • 45 minutes extended into the week
  • does it hurt?
  • more pathetic than
  • i came out all whispers
  • wipe it off
  • aunties on it
  • the dye campaign's humiliation
  • that the sun sets
  • Requiem for Pennylane
  • When I Do Sit and Read of Keats
  • the torn heart of a vintage record
  • certainly it is imperfect...
  • Muscat Gummy
  • Something is Rotten in the State of Denmark
  • ripping my hair out from its ends
  • \\ pomp without circumstance
  • once i had a girlfriend made of chocolate
  • selenicereus
  • Where Few Wash
  • ersaph, i want to fuck you
  • Melancholy Ode to Ray
  • that water can wash away all tears
  • even were i temper'd flame
  • i can't tell
  • work phenomenon, a compensation for hatred
  • exhumation
  • we have given our hearts away, (a sordid boon!)
  • fallen from grace
  • iris of the doomsayer
  • Regret in Blues: A Concerto
  • Pour les hommes, La vie heureuse n'existe pas (Revised)
  • August Wilts
  • a star burnt out
  • the lamentable hecatomb of humanity
  • Eulogy for a Roofer
  • some words on writing
  • may shame befall you
  • False October Love (Crying Seems Cathartic)
  • that we have each other.
  • [AI] he made mistakes, but still got up and smiled
  • where has your saviour gone?
  • who may measure how far a raindrop falls?
  • a million envelopes addressed to no one.
  • The Forgotten Choruses
  • Sensou Suru Nara Yumi, Yari, Ken da Tatakae
  • achromatic
  • my mother stole my favorite shoes and ate them because they were covered in rain.!
  • Giraffe Soup
  • expatriation of a legend: charm of ruin
  • grave world
  • valse du roi d'épouvantail
  • the plight of men
  • delusions over le champagne des ginger ales
  • Lesson Given to the Mascar'd School (Revised)
  • without words (no prowess)
  • the dualistic kartajan (lord of the desert)
  • the construction worker's charm
  • even the crow no longer welcomes rain
  • 7 new quatrains no milkshake
  • mesophillic starter, rennet and butter muslin (Revised)
  • the bus conceit
  • To Nagasaki,
  • ihavenothingleft
  • watercolour catastrophe
  • the obese lady conceit
  • checkerboard boy
  • Chinese Take-Out
  • [AEOS] through the mist the pathway narrows
  • shadows in the rain
  • the car's on fire and there's no driver at the wheel
  • 灰及び塵
  • or so she says
  • you do not understand! Being
  • the sun is but a youth in your backyard
  • GOD, DESOLATION! (endurance is a dead pirate)
  • the words which i wish i could speak are not words at all
  • spider-lady
  • Prima un Ballo in Maschera
  • "hello" i said the sky was crimson overhead
  • midnight street sojourn
  • sometimes when i hear doors creak
  • her monday pants
  • without sun we go mad for the taste of false air.
  • songs for turnips
  • the games we played when we were young
  • the water gushing into his ears smelled like heritage (Revised)
  • that night i tore your paintings to pieces
  • i should have bought a cat instead
  • ichido shikai nai life (this one-chance life)
  • as with memories, we fade
  • hibernation of the meek
  • Copernicus and the Tragically Lost First Season of "Iron Chef"
  • we put camel breakers out of business
  • carrying on (in liar's proverbs)
  • prophecy of the gypsy queen
  • a music box heard over the sound of a jackhammer
  • the ferris wheel is broken in sixteen different ways
  • the doppelgänger's daughter
  • The Snake Eats its Own Tail, for the Apple was one of Gettier's Facsimiles
  • The Book of Retribution
  • remarks made to my birthday-self
  • table d'hote: transient dinner guests
  • i never knew horseshoes were so unlucky
  • where is lady godiva when you need her?
  • devilfish
  • below the dewpoint
  • Jonkvrouwe Delphine Michèle Anne Marie Boël is kept hush hush
  • tinsel on a hot tin roof
  • A Dandy's Farewell
  • an fa xiàn jiàn miàn bàn shù yi shà qióng bào qu
  • this is your failure, (together and alone)
  • on the monastic tendencies of man
  • downpour on the midnight train
  • a sit under a
  • i would prefer not (edit)
  • ho yi goes to the field to see his far distant loved one
  • i didn't realize that i was just the sidekick
  • Cruising (Aki Mix)
  • some lines found washed ashore
  • the halls are decked with death
  • the santa claus parade drowned today
  • one wintry mornin'; polite interruptions in a civil society
  • bologna
  • sanctuary
  • Tales of the Antichrist - I. The Broken Wheel
  • some lines on standing out in the rain
  • brave new waves
  • the tale of steamclock and blackmouth girl
  • rivalry of two inorganic objects
  • hockey is worthy of analysis
  • Ode to a Greek Bastard
  • small moments

Inuki's favorite poems:
Poems Inuki has recently commented on:
  • rivalry of two inorganic objects
  • sometimes, a poem's not enough
  • Out to Tea
  • i didn't realize that i was just the sidekick
  • Inuki, Melted Down
  • Cruising (Aki Mix)
  • i would prefer not (edit)
  • ++ Commemoration

Threads Inuki has recently posted in:
  • Something Strange
  • Dandy
  • How much would you pay me to carry on posting?
  • Banned in the US - The Power of Nightmares - Must Watch - Seriously
  • Farewell, it's been a great adventure!
  • Dear Inuki
  • What song are you hooked up to lately ????


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