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the haiku inside this apple
gnormal

food goes in the hole
 1
words then come out of the hole
 2
we turn food to mud
 3

8 Jun 04

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we do?
 — meghanmidget

do we?
 — SimpleMind

maybe by mud he means shit, which this poem is. gawd, gnormal, great job!
 — unknown

food - words = mud
 — unknown

hehe.
 — lai

Nice. Kinda gross, but nice.
 — wendz

It's clever, I like it.
 — Doulos

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