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Trash
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She came to him
 1
with tears in her eyes
 2
 
 
He brushed them away
 3
with  *All New*
 4
Tears-Brush-Away
 5
from Ronco
 6
 
 
 
 
She clung to his comfort
 7
 
 
but could not hold on
 8
 
 
She was trash to another
 9
 
 
and then she was gone
 10
 
 
 
 
Later, he was stabbed
 11
through the heart
 12
with a K-Tel
 13
Jealous-Lover's-Revenge-Pal
 14
 
 
As Seen on CCTV
 15

24 Sep 02

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Comments:

i love this. it's brilliant.
 — unknown

This is great.
 — unknown

lol...um i dont get it...
 — unknown

Do you read Bloom County?
 — zepplin42

Sheer kitsch
 — unknown

Never heard of "Bloom County",   must saddle up bloodhound!  Is 'kitsch', vulgar good or vulgar bad, these days?
 — unknown

nice. great rhythm changes, compact in one rhythm at the end perception of this poem.
 — listen

Heh! Thanks for digging this up. Glad you liked. :)
 — unknown

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