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Slow Ascent
thefatwon

The beast propels onward
 1
Clicking and ticking he shrills
 2
Slow ascent to the climactic peak
 3
Clicking and ticking he shrills
 4
The beast propels onward
 5
 
 
Anticipation grips his victims
 6
As they grasp tight his limbs
 7
While gasping for one last breath
 8
Before descent occurs
 9
While gasping for one last breath
 10
As they grasp tight his limbs
 11
Anticipation grips his victims
 12

3 Aug 07


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