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Psalm 34
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A mosaic blossom
 1
fell like his father
 2
on to my Father
 3
carried by his sons.
 4
 
 
Holy holy water
 5
mixes in to candle faces,
 6
I am alive. Carrying my life
 7
yet carried by my children
 8
I made it to Psalm thirty four.
 9
 
 
An apple blossom
 10
fell like my arms
 11
around my newborn daughter,
 12
on to my Father,
 13
flesh of wood
 14
to dust and granite.
 15
In life he worked lathes,
 16
in death – emotion.
 17

2 Aug 07


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