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Force 5 to the Mountain Top
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little by little it trickled
 1
and tickled a stickle
 2
by and by cold water
 3
old daughter
 4
 
 
young slaughter
 5
reversed upstream
 6
born to dream
 7
wild and unseen
 8
 
 
it dangled and
 9
strangled every
 10
step of the way
 11
made to pay
 12
 
 
by the day
 13
light
 14
and at night
 15

2 Aug 07


(define the words in this poem)



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