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Food Chain
thefatwon

.                                        L    
 1
                                       A    W
 2
                                     S          A
 3
T                           E     I                 Y     S  
 4
       H            R                                             S  
 5
…            E                                                          O
 6
N                                                               M  
 7
  A                                                        E                    you
 8
H            E     G                                          T
 9
       R                   G       I        G     N     I      H
 10
T                                         B
 11

1 Aug 07

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ignore the period above the T in "there" - i had to put it there for compositional purposes
 — thefatwon

very nice job with the fish.
 — Virgil

This might read better if I was stoned out of my mind.  LOL.  I like the whole chain effect you got goin' on here, but I don't like the way you have to work to get the message, which is also unclear.  "There is always something bigger than you?"  I'm trying to find the metaphor/meaning in this.  It's also not very kind on the eyes.  A little too E.E. Cummings, perhaps?  Maybe after I smoke a blueberry blunt to my face it'll read better.
 — starr

I love it!  I had to read the other comments in order to see the whole fish thing.  I came back, favorited it and rated it a "10" now that I know wuzzup.  Very creative and original.  
 — starr

thank you for your comments
 — thefatwon

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