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Climbing the Hypervenilating Latter
Cherish

I know he probably wanted to say "Stop Freaking Out" but then he heard the fear in my voice...

Don't be afraid. I'll stay here with you.
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The bad dreams left your thoughts
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and have flown out the window to the
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nosy, old neighbors house.
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I'll stay with you until you stop shaking.
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Try to slow your heavy breathing.
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Pretend it turned into water that's
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clearing out all the negative energy
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that consumes you.
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It was only your imagination
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trying to tell you something that you
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misunderstood. Nothing more.
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Not to worry, the lights are on.
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It's not the dark you fear.
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Just the fact that you don't
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know what is hiding in the dark.
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If anything were there they're hiding
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from you.
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It's okay. I'll stay by your side.
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Together our shadows scare them away.
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20 Jul 07


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your the kind of guy i would like to date
 — unknown

haha...actually i'm a girl...my best friend is the one talking in the poem, he's the guy. I'll tell him you so :]
 — Cherish

said*
 — Cherish

last line is frickin phenomenal, can i buy it off of you?
 — joshcoops

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