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Pete best a baker became
gnormal

Best became a baker earning
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£8 a week and marrying
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a girl named Kathy who worked
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at the biscuit counter
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at a Woolworth's store.
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He later became
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a civil servant. Whatever
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his musical talent, personal
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choices or notoriety, the fate of
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his musical career was little
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different from that of many
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Liverpudlian musicians
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whose stars faded
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as musical trends changed.
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found poem on the pete best wikipedia page.

14 Jul 07

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Really well done, clean.   I don't even feel need to consult the Wiki page, which, btw, will likely alter beyond present recognition ere long.  So, if the present page is of value as source-documentation for your poem, it might be good to save a copy of the page.
Alternately, Wikipedia does archive page versions at intervals--so you can then go back "history" and find nearly the page you worked from.   The breaks are very well done, yes!  The ironies come through nicely.
 — reidORnetsky

Junk.
 — pelican

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