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Just passing through
unknown

She
 1
a river frozen
 2
a song to be chosen
 3
Moving...ever so slightly
 4
 
 
He
 5
the wind in a can
 6
a breath held in hand
 7
Hidden...so very tightly
 8
 
 
Passing sips between lips
 9
a skinny little dip
 10
Stirring...ever so rightly
 11
 
 
They
 12
a star that is old
 13
about to implode
 14
Given...so very brightly
 15

13 Jul 07


(define the words in this poem)



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