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Salvation???
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Long lost salvation
 1
Your enticing stare, full of cogency
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You pain me so.
 3
For you are far to facile,
 4
Leaving a rugged, and exotic catch
 5
As well as a curious predicament
 6
Is the weight of happiness greater then that of the right?
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Sweet daughter godess,
 8
Shine light on the tumultuos subject.
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For i am far to sightless to see the tunel
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11 Jul 07


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