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ecstacy
bear

and you thought
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this poem was about
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drugs
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but what it is all
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about is
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life and feeling
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better than you've
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ever felt before:
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high on life
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7 Jul 07

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than l7.
 — unknown

....helter skelter
 — seekinglight

No, didn't think of drugs. Was hoping something a little different than "high on life."
 — ashley87

me too
 — bear

Never prejudge people. It always backfires.
 — erato

this is true
 — bear

one real cool
 — bear

I'm sorry but this isn't a very powerful poem.  It does not inspire much in me, certainly not a feeling of being high on life.  You've written a snyopsis of your poem, now you could round it out to make it live up to its title.  Good luck.
 — Isabelle5

cheers, isabelle.
 — bear

Cheers back, Bear.  I really mean it when I say that you wrote an outline.  I think you could do a poem about the ecstacy of life very well.  You tend to see a side of things that others don't.  
 — Isabelle5

Well done my son-Please send me the pills that got you there.

Larry body poppin' Lark
 — larrylark

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