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Jack of all Trades

The skill of hand
is too deceive the eyes,
The skill of the mind
is to analyze the heart
But when the eyes are painted black
and your heart is too broke to turn back
that none of that matters,
The skill of life is
self preservation.

2 Jul 07

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I don't think its structured very well, I like the last 2 lines but the rest doesn't really life up to that.
 — Scud

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