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Jack of all Trades
Solstice

The skill of hand
 1
is too deceive the eyes,
 2
 
 
The skill of the mind
 3
is to analyze the heart
 4
 
 
But when the eyes are painted black
 5
and your heart is too broke to turn back
 6
that none of that matters,
 7
 
 
The skill of life is
 8
self preservation.
 9

2 Jul 07

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I don't think its structured very well, I like the last 2 lines but the rest doesn't really life up to that.
 — Scud

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