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Fish In The Sea
chloee

hello, i am chloe, the girl of your dreams,
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someone had said you were looking for me.
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look no father, and thats a bold guarantee
 3
i'm an angel compared to those fish in the sea,
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we'll swim past them, bathing in self-pride and speed
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to look back and see nothing but dust and debris.
 6
listen then, fisherman, let down your string
 7
i'll bite at your lines, but there's no catching me.
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2 Jul 07


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