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A Minute Poem:
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A Minute Poem:
 1
Full Moon of Cheticamp
 2
 
 
Pink moon a-bob in your curved palm
 3
a swimming calm
 4
descends with night
 5
and bends the light
 6
 
 
whose particles hold love in waves
 7
the force that saves
 8
still stars from sleep
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yet lulls the sheep
 10
 
 
to drop like clouds upon these hills
 11
where dark distills
 12
a world or two
 13
for me and you.
 14

2 Jul 07

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sweet, jazzy top-notes. Line 3 is pinkly endearing. Delicate whimsy.
 — banditfemme

Very pretty and like Banditfemme said, "delicate whimsy."  I agree.  
 — starr

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