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the stone poem
bettalpha

who knows? who really knows?
 1
if a tortoise is not a stone.
 2
who, by wishful thinking alone,
 3
moves its leathery toes.
 4

2 Jul 07


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ah, the power of wishful thinking is quite perturbing.
it's > its

clever musing
.
.
.
 — banditfemme

i know , they woke up a few weeks ago ,
first thing he did was try and hump her .
 — unknown

quite.
 — bettalpha

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