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back-yard nationalists
bettalpha

there is a place
 1
where boxer shorts hang,
 2
 
 
where solitary standards fly
 3
proud,
 4
across flowering boundaries;
 5
 
 
washing lines of union
 6
displayed with jack regard
 7
for the suffering
 8
made in empire factories.
 9

              \/

2 Jul 07


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love this, betty. love the word play.
is l4 necessary?
maybe delete it and the 'where' in l5?
i dunno.
i'm hungry. gotta go.
 — unknown

thank you for your advice i took this out

where
british winds brush concrete,
 — bettalpha

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