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Never be the same.
unknown

Something rattles in my brain
 1
I'm waken
 2
into some kind of life
 3
or heart
 4
or puss
 5
breaking in space I know I'm taking what I have
 6
and losing it here
 7
to never gain it back.
 8
 
 
I had you
 9
in this life
 10
or heart
 11
or sake
 12
of living.
 13

1 Jul 07


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OMG! This ones so scary and angry! I rly like it!
 — ophelia89

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