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The best day of your life.
lieskilllies

Not that you would,
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but so that I can feel better
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don't worry;
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you still
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make my head hurt
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make my vision blur
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make my mind melt
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and maybe
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make my hands
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into two left feet.
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Vonnegut says,
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"so it goes"
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and I see
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that he's got a point because
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with
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or without
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you complicating simple situations,
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I'll still be a miserable,
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confused,
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prick
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and you'll have to be okay with that.
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It makes me contemplate telling you about every song I wrote about you. ha, as if.

1 Jul 07


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