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Leaving The House
chloee

Heads turn as I walk by.
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Do they know that I'm alone,
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or am I just a floating ghost?
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Do they know I want to cry
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every day I remain alive?
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Can they see the fearful screams
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hushed to regretful sighs
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burst out of my mind
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and ride a lonely line
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out of my eye?
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30 Jun 07

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'Every day' is two words.  'Exploding' into a 'lonely line' is a difficult feat.

Mister Micawber
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 — MMicawber

exploding into a lonely line refers to bursting (exploding) into tears. tears being the thing that is riding a lonely line out of my eye
 — chloee

Might want to change Explode to Burst, better visual I think and makes more sense with the second line.
 — Solstice

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