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The Stoics

Sometimes, I go to my friends'
house and talk for hours
about how fucking good
our favourite bands are.

30 Jun 07

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sometimes i go to
my friends house
to watch 'the
overeducated to
despair' share
the commiserations
of mutual unrepair.

 — unknown

this has a lot of potential...why'd you cut it short? the analogy between the religious/philosophical mystery schools of the classical era and the multitudes of cliques the new generation has needs much more attention than just 4 lines.

not to say what you have now is poor or anything...but it's on the right track.
 — Virgil

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