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//tuesday mornings before daycare//
unknown

i strap my
 1
son
 2
in a shopping
 3
cart
 4
 
 
we wander the
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aisles
 6
of wal-mart
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let him
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touch the bristles
 9
of a grill brush
 10
 
 
call out
 11
the different colors
 12
of towels
 13
 
 
name the different
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power-tools
 15
he'll never see me
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use
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and when a
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milk-truck
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with a winnebago
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ass
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cuts across our
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path
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we both swivel
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on point
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hot for the
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taste
 27
 
 
of a different
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brand
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30 Jun 07

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Perfect comment about the banality of life in the slow lane.
 — erato

erato,

thanks for reading.

justin.
 — unknown

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