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what i hated most about him
was the satisfied grin
that stayed with him for 3
minutes after each
time he abused the public
restroom but never seemed
to arise after he was done
with me although he had
his own stall and i
would clean up after him.

30 Jun 07

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This is interesting, I just can't find a connection to T.S. Elliot as one would expect from the title "wasteland".
 — sparrow

You have balls for purloining Eliot. But I know exactly where you are coming from. I wrote several similar poems about the sadistic person I'm involved with. Therapeutic, right?
 — erato

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