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Fire in a tropical desert.
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The smoke plumes for 500 miles.
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Morning like a raw throat over a clear still lake.
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Captured in the blinking eye of an escaping lizard.
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squatting beside a riot.
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Dateless and flailing in the breeze.
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Edging closer to a hurricane and shouting at the eye.
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26 Jun 07

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a little turned off by all the periods, but the diction and imagry are exquisite
 — thefatwon

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