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The slumber hour
unknown

I dream upon the midnight slumber
 1
Holding fast to dreary hours
 2
Dreams of faith in god I lost
 3
Dream of life I once held true
 4
 
 
Misty hours setting in
 5
Faded light pants the sky
 6
Ghost forming in the heavens
 7
Clouded hours slipping by
 8
Dreary whispers echo loud
 9
Tender kisses wash the pain
 10
Love whispers out its tails
 11
Passion found in dark green eyes
 12
Ten thousand hours in your embraces
 13
The hold of fait I now relate  
 14
 
 
I dream upon the midnight wonder
 15
A ghost I found amid the slumber
 16
The hours past between the sand
 17
Washed away buy loving hands
 18
Sealed in time by a misled soul
 19
Held in glass with the dieing rose
 20
Poetic love and faded throw
 21
Upon the shores of Jerusalem
 22
 
 
Take the wave of third emotion
 23
Fade the hour of tender slumber
 24
Slipping throw the sands of time
 25
Dream away the life before
 26
Dieing peddles upon the ground
 27
Abound the story miss spelled tails
 28
The fraud, the fair the dream awaken
 29
 
 
The darkened walls fade the story
 30
The dewy hour hazed away
 31
Slip away from dreary slumber
 32
Tender love writes the story
 33
Molds the courage once desired
 34
Now the dreams of dewy hours
 35
Cloud the slumber faded flowers
 36

25 Jun 07


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this sucks learn to write a poem or anything at all
 — unknown

wellthen
i dont think it sucks, per se
but
it does appear to be riddled with
spelling issues?
nicesoftfeelingpoem
 — chuckles

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