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Playstation and beyond
CheBourdain7

Buttons are smashing
 1
with the sounds of Spyro the Dragon
 2
appearing on screen
 3
making smartass remarks.
 4
The seratonins in their boyish brains
 5
are rising.
 6
Along with their thoughts
 7
of Pokemon the following morning.
 8
 
 
The Miller lites
 9
and the vibes of 50 cents are smashing
 10
all through the 2 a.m. night.
 11
With the image of an attention whore
 12
in the pool,
 13
proudly showing off her tender
 14
C-cups
 15
and them, with their natural instincts
 16
which is to enjoy her graceful sluttiness
 17
all through the 2 a.m. night.
 18
The seratonins in their borderline adolescent
 19
brains are rising.
 20
Along with their thoughts
 21
of a painful hangover and the sweet fragrant
 22
breath of a Denise Pancake the following morning.
 23

25 Jun 07


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i think you will find the " smartass remarks " are Haiku's
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