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In the Dark of the Night
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The stars whispered
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light and silver,
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"you will never be near her"
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but the morning shivers
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as the sun grows nearer.
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Loss is living
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and light frames the shadows,
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in the dark of the night
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you fight your own battles.
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25 Jun 07


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