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when they had finally finished
tucking away the events of
the day and were left to
confront the mess of
each other, he would kiss
clenched fists until tendons
released fingers to
form wilting sunflowers.

24 Jun 07

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Please see companion poem -- "Tuck." Of the two, this is more poetic. Sunflowers was an inspired end note.
 — banditfemme

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