poetry critical

online poetry workshop



I'll rent yesterday for promises (a repost)
turtlepoet

yeah
 1
I didn't want to
 2
                and a part of me
 3
                                        wishes
 4
wishes I could
 5
        take back yesterday
 6
keep it
 7
         hold it
 8
                  bring life back
 9
                                        to what
 10
 
 
                                                    we
 11
 
 
                                                        destroyed
 12
 
 
when I said
 13
          I won't hold the decision
 14
                                                           to abort
 15
against you
 16
                  I meant it
 17
                                 and I won't
 18
            but
 19
when I say
 20
            that this was the first
 21
                                                       and
 22
last time
 23
              I meant it
 24
                                and it is
 25
 
 
I wish I could take back yesterday
 26
but I guess I'll let you keep the past
 27
as long as you promise I have the future
 28

22 Jun 07


(define the words in this poem)
(39 more poems by this author)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

where ya been?
 — varun

engaged, then not engaged and now I'm back being myself...I wis I didn't lose myself
 — turtlepoet

0.358s