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vision
shmurr

give me your height
 1
I need your vision
 2
to see it all differently
 3
I'm seeing a mirror reflecting
 4
but what do you see?
 5
do you see
 6
 
 
a footprint on the bottom of the ocean?
 7
a mosquito caught in the wind?
 8
 
 
opening my eyes
 9
it’s only parts again
 10
pulling on the wire
 11
but nothing’s coming in
 12
nothing's coming in
 13
 
 
a whisper in a thunderstorm
 14
a mosquito caught in the wind
 15
only
 16

a song, open for suggestions, this is pretty rough

22 Jun 07


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