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show dont tell
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the frustrated author
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threw his papers off
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the desk, tossed
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pens in the air and
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ordered her to
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stand on his altar
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and remove all clothes
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whenever he realized
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no intricate verse
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could do justice
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to conveying the
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twisted sensations
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she arose in him.
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22 Jun 07


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