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show dont tell

the frustrated author
threw his papers off
the desk, tossed
pens in the air and
ordered her to
stand on his altar
and remove all clothes
whenever he realized
no intricate verse
could do justice
to conveying the
twisted sensations
she arose in him.

22 Jun 07

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