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They all left.
outstretched

This room
 1
I swear it's glued together
 2
by every piece of tape
 3
holding
 4
a picture on the wall.
 5

21 Jun 07


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hmmm...for some reason i think this might work better as a two-liner, which i normally don't really get into...?
 — gem_grrrl

I don't get the title's connection to the observation. Are you looking at a room after a crowd has vacated? interesting piece.
 — Trish77

psh i liked it ha, its to the point like a #2
 — stilltime

Thank you for the suggestions, it might fit in better as a two so maybe i'll give that a try. The title is one of those titles that kindof only has meaning to the person writing it.
 — outstretched

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