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Divorce
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A juxtaposition
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position
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in the area of showing revealing the
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peeling, the
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reeling of the screen behind the theater
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of drama, exposing the choppy meter of
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the dialogue between the actors in
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selfish, lonely irregularity, which
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is the sight revealing two worlds,
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evolving over
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time, like two epochs separated at birth,
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in where eons and ages fluctuate
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between the birth
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days, the celebrations, the simple reminders cornering
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all figures, pin pointing, revealing it
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self as the
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day spent alone, when the house split.
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21 Jun 07


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listen...i think this is one of your best.
good writing, good rhyme, good breaks.

Sam
 — unknown

you left a really nice comment, Sam. you have no idea how much that made my day, my decade. to say it is one of my best suggests you have read others of mine ... and that just adds to my improved mood.

thank you. for favoriting. for everything.

it'll be your turn soon.
 — listen

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