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Different Plans
zekejacobi

I don't know how long I can do this, he said.
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I think the universe has different plans for me.
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We sat there in silence; I thought to myself that this is
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the thing we all come to, this is the thing we all
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fight, and if we are lucky enough to lose, our lives become
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beautiful with mystery again, and I sat there silent because
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that is not something that can be said.
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19 Jun 07

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this poem speaks volumes to me. i have some serious issues with the universe and it's "plans". thanks for a second opinion.
 — unknown

thanks unk
 — zekejacobi

well, good, but it reads like prose with line breaks.
 — aerol

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