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cusp of revolution
jenakajoffer

Love, forsaken
 1
you abandon inescapable
 2
manifestations; sorrow
 3
be gone-
 4
 
 
you choose
 5
defense mechanisms
 6
to buffer,
 7
make a tough, durable
 8
machinist-
 9
you have fought stupidity, ineffectualness,
 10
bad taste.
 11
 
 
Explode your myths over me;
 12
tell of your disdain
 13
for middle-of-the-road policies,
 14
run-of-the-mill families-
 15
your hankering after extremes, indulgements
 16
and how they never interfere
 17
with your schemes-
 18
 
 
pursue
 19
forever, with unrelenting zeal
 20
as you strive to remain honest-
 21
you could spit the unspeakable
 22
to the unapproachable
 23
with your laughter,
 24
a direct barometer of your mental state
 25
(you will always be forgiven),
 26
even when
 27
 
 
dishing out your authority
 28
without compromise,
 29
when you fail to give ground
 30
or when you keep me at a distance,
 31
(no room for recrimination).
 32
 
 
lure me close
 33
when you need me most-
 34
your make-love,
 35
carnal and ecstatic,
 36
overshadowing your sensitivities
 37
(I know they exist).
 38
 
 
I know how you like to be touched,
 39
I know when you need quiet;
 40
 
 
in time
 41
I will master the offering.
 42

12 Jun 07


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bask, my dear, bare back to sky
and rest your weary cheek
upon your folded arms that i
may give you what you seek

now float, my love, now let your mind
go wandering out to sea
but leave your tired limbs behind
leave your body for me
 — unknown

u r so sweet,
I always loved your big k.
 — unknown

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