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Feeling Determined (sitting on a bench)
MattPat

The leaves were dancing and prancing as I sat on the bench
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And the flowers were dying in mulch to my left;
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Some thriving and determined in the afternoon sun.
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I saw trash left by others—candies and delight.
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A strong wind carrying wind hands;
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Its fingers through my hair and the leaves,
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and was cherishing everyone,
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cherishing every one.
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Standing on pavement, I walked to the trees and the shade;
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Through a path made by others,
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It was patted and matted, walked on by many.
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8 Jun 07


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