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Noah's Ark

Noah's Mom likes to buy him insects
embedded in transparent soap—
wishes she could buy the same
with gorillas, hippos or giraffes inside—
so she could scrub at his skin with it
and create a zoo around the bath edge
for re-creation and dryer times.

7 Jun 07

Rated 8 (8) by 2 users.
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 — humblebee

Different, but some may not get it. Not bad, just I don't know how interesting it will be to people that aren't you. 6/10
 — Henry

Absolutely brilliantly imaginative.

Larry wallowing Lark
 — larrylark

I wanted to do something a little different. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but it's nice that it's a few peoples. Thank you everyone.
 — unknown