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Noah's Ark
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Noah's Mom likes to buy him insects
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embedded in transparent soap—
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wishes she could buy the same
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with gorillas, hippos or giraffes inside—
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so she could scrub at his skin with it
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and create a zoo around the bath edge
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for re-creation and dryer times.
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7 Jun 07

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fantastic!
 — humblebee

Different, but some may not get it. Not bad, just I don't know how interesting it will be to people that aren't you. 6/10
 — Henry

Absolutely brilliantly imaginative.

Larry wallowing Lark
 — larrylark

I wanted to do something a little different. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but it's nice that it's a few peoples. Thank you everyone.
 — unknown

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