'Sugar Ray's Every Morning' need to be quoted.
L 8 = non chalantly - is one one word
L 12 = subtleties
L 8 = non chalantly - is *one* word
Great little snapshot of modern life. Love that song too. Line 8: nonchalantly is all the one word by the way. Why is five capitalised in the title? Anyway, love this poem (but why does it have to be a Honda Civic?!)
as endearing as a found poem. The mistakes enhanc e the traffic light scribble charm. Written at the wheel. Even the jumbled tenses are sweet.
natural. Don't polish this one up, please. Although you can correct the spelling errors, I suppose.