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it's 2010 again

and now the ozone layer's gone for good
and the government wont even lie
because it's hard to point a finger
when the sun gets in your eyes

28 May 07

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last couplet's the best part of the poem, i think. the first half feels like I'm being lectured (besides I'm sure the government fully acknowledges ozone depletion is going on; maybe you're confusing it with climate change?)
 — Virgil

global warming! hopefully 2010 still exists
 — unknown

yeah...global warming. this was great although it took me a while to understand.
 — unknown

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