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Secrecy of the Papillotomy
mints

It’s a nightmare in your duodenum
 1
Unseen, unfelt – but waiting
 2
For the perfect moment
 3
To incise through well-merited layers,
 4
longitudinal and circular strata,
 5
layers of our delicious tubes.
 6
It is art – of duodenal measures.
 7
 
 
Comparing the electrical activity of smooth muscle cells
 8
To this world
 9
of haves, have-nots, and do-not-remembers
 10
Has been more difficult than falling asleep
 11
without Canadian hostages
 12
to accommodate for ransom
 13
Your ethereal presence has been
 14
an incision into the major duodenal papilla
 15
of seven hundred rabbits in Australia –
 16
beneficial, but only to Australians.
 17

28 May 07


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Only enough time for a quick read and response

I was thinking you could change L7 to
It is art - of measured fingers

and L17 to
beneficial, but only to humans
 — unknown

nice. good title.
 — listen

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