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something i will never see

there is nothing more beautiful
than the day you left me.
for it leaves me with this immense emptiness
that i am destined to fill.
to fill the cup to it's brim
with excuses of every kind.
as to why it was your fault you left me
and never mine.

28 May 07

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L7 - you could remove 'you left me' and it would still say the same thing.

Nice poem
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