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something i will never see
raskolniikov

there is nothing more beautiful
 1
than the day you left me.
 2
for it leaves me with this immense emptiness
 3
that i am destined to fill.
 4
to fill the cup to it's brim
 5
with excuses of every kind.
 6
as to why it was your fault you left me
 7
and never mine.
 8

28 May 07


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L7 - you could remove 'you left me' and it would still say the same thing.

Nice poem
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