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Spine #9
sunshinesgf

One interactive plaything after another
 1
flew quickly from the shelves, riots ensued
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over supply and demand;
 3
the prices rose at an alarming rate for a
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cuckoo's clockwork dolly with her
 5
nest of curls.
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27 May 07

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this is
perfect
short and
full-bodied
a trickster's  magic
view-finder
that shifts and tilts with each read.
 — banditfemme

don;t forget to keep the tense. prices "rose" not rising. otherwise good
 — unknown

Boring as heck. 4/10
 — Henry

geez henry it's a spine poem! you are not very nice!
 — sunshinesgf

ONE FLEW OVER THE CUCKOO'S NEST! i didn't get it the first time!!!! tricky
 — unknown

What is a spine poem?
 — unknown

a spine poem has a phrase (like a song lyric, book title, anything) as the first word of every line.
 — unknown

Interesting, I had not heard of that.
 — rocket

thanks banditfemme, you rock!
 — sunshinesgf

Now I know what a spine poem is...
neat poem,
I love that flick.
Jen-
 — jenakajoffer

not terrible
 — unknown

thanks for readin jen- it's a favorite of mine also but more the book than the movie!
unknown.. that's the best i can hope for. i know the content is a little drab.
 — sunshinesgf

Funny.  Last summer, there were 3-4 Cabbage Patch dolls floating face up in the rank water.  
 — Isabelle5

Oh, I see what this is doing!  Never heard of a spine poem!
 — Isabelle5

first time for everything!
 — sunshinesgf

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