| Spine #9 |
sunshinesgf
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One interactive plaything after another
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flew quickly from the shelves, riots ensued
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over supply and demand;
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the prices rose at an alarming rate for a
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cuckoo's clockwork dolly with her
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nest of curls.
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27 May 07 |
Rated 8.7 (8.7) by 8 users.
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this is
perfect
short and
full-bodied
a trickster's magic
view-finder
that shifts and tilts with each read.
— banditfemme
don;t forget to keep the tense. prices "rose" not rising. otherwise good
— unknown
Boring as heck. 4/10
— Henry
geez henry it's a spine poem! you are not very nice!
— sunshinesgf
ONE FLEW OVER THE CUCKOO'S NEST! i didn't get it the first time!!!! tricky
— unknown
What is a spine poem?
— unknown
a spine poem has a phrase (like a song lyric, book title, anything) as the first word of every line.
— unknown
Interesting, I had not heard of that.
— rocket
thanks banditfemme, you rock!
— sunshinesgf
Now I know what a spine poem is...
neat poem,
I love that flick.
Jen-
— jenakajoffer
not terrible
— unknown
thanks for readin jen- it's a favorite of mine also but more the book than the movie!
unknown.. that's the best i can hope for. i know the content is a little drab.
— sunshinesgf
Funny. Last summer, there were 3-4 Cabbage Patch dolls floating face up in the rank water.
— Isabelle5
Oh, I see what this is doing! Never heard of a spine poem!
— Isabelle5
first time for everything!
— sunshinesgf
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