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silent night
skinnyJon

ghostly gleamed
 1
the elm’s white bones
 2
in the soft pale light
 3
of the laughing koan
 4

25 May 07

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You need to rethink the title....if it needs one at all
 — unknown

perhaps you could indulge me by changing "moon" to 'koan"
 — banditfemme

consider yourself indulged - i trust this will be just as illuminating.
 — skinnyJon

thank you, Slim J~ + 1
 — banditfemme

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