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marvelings of masturbation (repost)
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she was tripping traces
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in her field of fancy,
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prancing pretty
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and hoofing high
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because baby it's better
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when, in minds' meanderings,
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you can cheat the chalk
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and silk the sigh
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or maybe it's the marvel
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of self-stimulation,
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knowing this night
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the freedom to fly
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from pretense and pretext
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of "yes" and yawn
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to pleasant pleasure
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of me, mine, and my
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24 May 07

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Slip sliding away...you selfish bastard.
 — unknown

hahaha...erm...thank you.
sigh.
 — unknown

pink and slippery.
delicious poem.
However, I don't understand what "cheat the chalk" means. Your poem does some fancy leg-work.
 — banditfemme

cheat the chalk - stepping outside the boundaries (in this case, only fantasizing about it).
thanks bf:)
 — unknown

have a 10
 — unknown

thanks buddy.
that one felt so good, can i have another?
 — unknown

And now I'll have a cigarette
 — unknown

shall we share that smoke?
 — unknown

I'd like to get in on that smoke...
ahhhhh,
what a poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Gotta light?  EXCELLENT poem.  I like the unusual lyrics.   :-)  
 — starr

hey jen...smoke rings to you:)
starr - thanks buddy.
 — unknown

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