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Summit
PollyReg

You climaxed
 1
a culmination
 2
of possibility for me;
 3
traipsing up through deceit
 4
wearing clogs.
 5
 
 
Noisy
 6
you came trekking colour
 7
to my ears. I bellowed
 8
and you waltzed
 9
within an apex of truth.
 10

22 May 07


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What does it all mean! a metaphoric pinnacle of?
I like the poem's conceit
It's all show and no tell
weird
thanks
 — unknown

More adventurous than the previous poems today. I do, however, agree with the above comment. In the end this says little, but does so interestingly.
 — unknown

thanks for reading, unknowns.

needs to be a little more concrete, yes?
 — PollyReg

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