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bitter taste of dusk
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sun falls
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into a field of green tea
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20 May 07

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hmmm.
 — varun

rewritten.
 — unknown

bitter taste of cock
pants fall
into a bush of poison ivy


thank you

st3ntorian
 — unknown

thank me for your next orgasm
 — unknown

bitter taste of thanks
she falls
into a sea of mockery



thank you

st3ntorian
 — unknown

better endings are avoidable
don't fall
into a bitter ever after
 — unknown

better endings are unavailable
dont spoil
the inevitable


no thanks

st3ntorian
 — unknown

*aren't

i would fluff
my love bags
for you too
 — unknown

> better endings are unavailable
> dont spoil
> the inevitable

i'd say it is too late
 — unknown

tourist

bitter taste of tusk
elephants fall
into trucks in zimbabwe


see i can be a sensitive boy

st3ntorian
 — unknown

it's a sexy dichotomy
 — unknown

o.

i think i know you.


perv down your street
 — unknown

you don't know me
you will want to
 — unknown

her daily mouthful


well you ll have to show me how to find you
 — unknown

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