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sentence poem (Adream)
gnormal

A dream is a marble
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in a porcelain bowl
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13 May 07

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a restless mandala
 — banditfemme

adream, pronounced a-dre-am is a beautiful name.  though i've never met anyone given it.
 — hank

bandit, thats a nice tight attractive description.
and thanks to you, having been forced to look up mandala,
i found this.
and you have to love this:
http://www.pictoplasma.com/exhibitions/bunny/bunny_mandala .jpg
 — gnormal

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